you get up as fresh as ‘just born’
one insecured thought, lingering through out last night..
tells you though ‘life is going to be all fine’
one friend..
who cares for you, as much as u do
one lovely message..
' see you soon '
one small road..
you wish it never ends
one small garden..
and scenery around..
oh, how much I love talking to my plants still
one peacock, bunch of those bamboos
one bench over bridge, and some waterfalls
who wants more..
one walk over one talk..
combination cant get better
one sweet smile..
assures your deepest concerns
one life..
just to keep it going,
one date..
i wish, i go on
with mr. nature!..
again and again :)
7 comments:
Wow..your date with Mr. nature seems to be very touching..it takes lot of creativity to express your true feelings without fabricating the message of the poem(and also ensuring rhyming words without changing its meaning)
one date with Mr. nature, i wish you go on again and again.
Fabulous..
waah! date ho toh aisi ho varna na ho! wonderfully penned down priti....ur thoughts are as refreshing as nature itself!
Hi Priti ,,,,,,
Very calm anD touchiNg placE wch I always LikE ............ I wish if I wud be theRe ............
Natural... equally natural writeup! :)
Natural!!! and equally natural writeup... :) very nice... lol!!!
liked the pic :D
thanks but my friend has clicked this picture(waterfall)not me!:D
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