Sunday, November 23, 2008

One date with Mr.Nature!

one early morning..
you get up as fresh as ‘just born’

one insecured thought, lingering through out last night..
tells you though ‘life is going to be all fine’

one friend..
who cares for you, as much as u do

one lovely message..
' see you soon '

one small road..
you wish it never ends

one small garden..
and scenery around..
oh, how much I love talking to my plants still

one peacock, bunch of those bamboos
one bench over bridge, and some waterfalls
who wants more..

one walk over one talk..
combination cant get better

one sweet smile..
assures your deepest concerns

one life..
just to keep it going,

one date..
i wish, i go on
with mr. nature!..
again and again :)

7 comments:

Anonymous said...

Wow..your date with Mr. nature seems to be very touching..it takes lot of creativity to express your true feelings without fabricating the message of the poem(and also ensuring rhyming words without changing its meaning)

one date with Mr. nature, i wish you go on again and again.

Fabulous..

InkTank said...

waah! date ho toh aisi ho varna na ho! wonderfully penned down priti....ur thoughts are as refreshing as nature itself!

Unknown said...

Hi Priti ,,,,,,

Very calm anD touchiNg placE wch I always LikE ............ I wish if I wud be theRe ............

Anonymous said...

Natural... equally natural writeup! :)

Anonymous said...

Natural!!! and equally natural writeup... :) very nice... lol!!!

Junius said...

liked the pic :D

priti said...

thanks but my friend has clicked this picture(waterfall)not me!:D